Here is a constructive piece of advice:

Simply expressing old ideas in new terms is an old technique that many of us have seen time and time again. Try using plain English versus:
  • Non-kinetic modular elements
  • (semi) (non) permissive environment
  • Military as core buzz word
  • Shape the environment, not destroy it


Those will simply get you tossed from the TOC

And finally try not lecturing the reader because you are not communicating effectively as in

Try to read and understand the things you like to refer to as "newfangled talk" first.
Tom